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‘Seaside towns in the age of austerity’ – (Prof Fothergill, Sheffield Hallam University – October 2015)

PDF Power Point presentation click here- Prof Fothergill ‘Seaside towns in the age of austerity’ (Oct 2015)1



#IIMPScrum expert series – ‘How to respond to reviewer comments?’ Prof Kautonen and Prof Fink, ) @ARU_BusinessSch

How to respond to reviewer comments? (Prof Kautonen and Prof Fink, 03.11.2015)

Background: Teemu and Matthias

  • 50% desk rejected, reviews usually from two or more peers, and great variability in comments.
  • Knowing the people, editor etc in the journal and their preferences is very  useful when directing your paper!!

Key tips: 

  • Avoid a desk reject by: (1) clarify any prior peer reviewing that has already been undertaken. (2) Tailor paper for a specific journal and the conversations currently underway [include citations in that journal!]. (3) Be explicit about papers importance and implications at the outset; its ‘impact’ and ‘contributions’.
  • Dealing with the reviews: (1) don’t just cherry pick the comments you want to address! Do them all – copy all comments in to table and react to each one — ensure all comments have been dealt with [never just put ‘DONE’].
  • Re-submission: (1) write explicit and detailed covering letter to editor and reviewers. Don’t be too emotional, and although you think the reviewers might be wrong, there is the assumption reviewers are right [and usually on reflection-they are]. 
  • The response letter to the Editor: (1) response generally, and to the specific reviewers e.g. ‘Response to reviewer 1’…. (2) the letter must  be grovelling, thank so much for comments, acknowledge the editors and their wisdom.

Types of comments from reviewer, and response strategies:

(1) ‘you have to rewrite the whole thing!’ Editors/reviewers like the idea but theoretical framing insufficient and/or contribution not clear. You need to show contribution to actual discussions on-going. (2) ‘there is something wrong with the method’ [esp quantitative articles]. (3) ‘you need to consider source A, theory B, or perspective C’. (4) ‘you need to explain in more detail XYZ’ [sometimes feels superfluous; but just DO IT]. (5) ‘you need to include something something stupid and/or irrelevant’ [so say, thank you for pointing this out – please refer to page X, or even just pretend that you have newly included!]. (6) ‘comments conflict between reviewers’ – if this is the case, contact the editor and sound out a suitable way forward. If they don’t respond, just go for the reviewer comment who is more critical than the other [and raise this in the letter to the editor about this conflict].

NOTE: Sometimes you will get a comment from the editor saying ‘take seriously X comment’ – then you take seriously and prioritise.

Blogger Q+A:

  • You always have to waver on reviewer comments? Or stick to your guns?
  • Is there a difference between the TYPE of comments you get – depending on the star of the paper?
  • 2 vs. 1 — turned in to a Game – 1st loved it, another mid-way, another hated it. Response to reviewers 1st round — knew who the hater was, and responded politely but knew it was a losing battle – methodological differences. Focused on the middle reviewer to sway the balance. For second review – was 2 vs. 1 edged in our favour. And we played HIM out of the game. Leadership from Editor, despite being a top journal was weak. It worked but a wise strategy?
  • Know who the reviewer is, and know you will meet them — wise tactic to drop in a subtle line about the paper?


Academic Skills – a breakdown of week 1 – 12 content (attached PDF)

CLICK HERE FOR PDF: MASTER Prezi – Week 1 – 12 slides (updated 12.10.2015)



@BBCCambs 2015 interview- developing slow, sustainable tourism in Cambridge, UK by @michaelbduignan @ARU_BusinessSch

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SNL on Plagarism – how not to write your university assignments! :)

Active learning and live assessment in the field biz school events management an @HEAcademy case study of good practice. @ARUBusinessSch

This project document chapter offers a brief review of recent literature about three forms of active learning: (1) simulated student projects are contrasted with live projects in the form of (2) internal service projects and (3) projects with external partners. Type (3) is referred to in the literature as service learning and student consulting projects (Eyler& Giles, 1999; Cooke & Williams 2004). While most of the literature seems to focus on the effects of the students’ personal development, this chapter discusses the relationship between motivation, assessment and role perceptions, and highlights the positive effects on aspects of student employability, as well as on the students’ and lecturers’ professionalism and identification with the institution.

Heidelberg International Business Academy (HIB) is a business school with an international study programme modelled along British lines that leads to the degree- level award of Bachelor of Arts (Honours). HIB is an associated institution of the Open University.
Access the resource below:

Thanks to the HEA for developing this resource in collaboration with the affiliated institution.

Writing dissertations @ ARU_BusinessSch in tourism? From confusion to conclusion…here is a superb @HEAcademy 9 part guide…

Writing dissertations in tourism

Writing dissertations is a daunting process, particularly at the beginning. Where to start, how to plan, what to research – are the initial starting points. Thanks to the Higher Education Academy (HEA) and affiliated authors, they help to deconstruct the process down to the following 9 parts in the context of tourism, hospitality and leisure.

Have a read, and let me know in the comments – how they helped you, and the advice you would give students entering the third year to prepare and succeed at their dissertations…

Research in tourism, leisure, events (part 1)

Introducing the research process (part 2)

Getting started (part 3)

Literature reviewing in tourism, hospitality and leisure  (part 4)

Designing research and methodology in tourism, hospitality and leisure (part 5)

Analysing your results in tourism, hospitality and leisure (part 6)

Discussing your findings in tourism, hospitality and leisure (part 7)

Concluding your research dissertations in tourism hospitality and leisure (part 8)

The final dissertation write up in tourism hospitality and leisure (part 9)

Thanks to @HEA Academy and associated authors for providing these resources.

LinkedIn best practice insights for staff and students by @ChezZzag @ARU_BusinessSch

Presentation by Cheryl Greyson,
Lecturer in Marketing @ARU_BusinessSch, Department @MET

#jobsQ Live Video Hangout: ‘How to be a Successful Digital Academic to Boost Your Career’ (27 Jan 2015)

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